Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Flash Forward - Dinner is Served


I am sitting at the computer.  My older daughter is on the couch.  The twins begin to scream at her.  She yells back.  They cry louder. I am disturbed.  My husband is outside conversing with the neighbors.  I look around.  I see a mess.  I begin picking up toys at a furious rate.  I am trailed by two screaming toddlers.  My older daughter runs to her room.  I hear her bedroom door slam.  I begin to make dinner.  Pots clang.  Pots bang. One toddler reaches up.  One toddler rolls around on the kitchen floor.  A glass crashes.  Fragments splatters.  Time-out ensues.  Wails continue.  Door opens.  She returns.  Then…Hushhhh. One Fish, Two Fish.  Water boils.  Red Fish, Blue Fish.  Aromas waft.  Dinner is served.

3 comments:

  1. This is a dynamite story!! I really like the simplicity!!! It paints a perfect picture!!

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  2. I've been there, I have twin six year olds (a boy and a girl) and an eight year old son. I rarely miss the days of the double stroller but sometimes I wish they were still small and chubby.It's funny how three kids seems like a large family these days but to a lot of folks it does. Hang in there, the dinner hour is often the toughest!

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  3. I really like the flow, and I can at least partially relate to the story since I spend a lot of time with my cousin who has two kids. But overall, I really especially like the flow.

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